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“Every encounter is a surprise”
My heart is drenched in wine,
you’ll be on my mind.
这是HENRY老师的第158篇原创
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Section A: 考题最强前情回顾
2018年上海中考英语真题作文:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My progress”. (以“我进步了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。
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2019年上海中考英语真题作文
1. Don’t judge people by their looks. They may not be good-looking but still be nice.
2. When your friends do something stupid, you don’t have to follow them.
3. Don’t tell your teacher that your dog ate your homework, especially if you don’t have a dog.
4. Life is like a ‘choose your own ending’ book- you can choose whatever adventure you want.
审题：
2019中考真题目要求和D篇蜜汁硬核相关，要求从阅读D篇的观点中任意选择一个。形式非常新颖。题目看似令人无所适从，仔细审题后发现这些TOPIC和生活紧密联系，还是原来的配方，还是最熟悉的味道（如有不服，雨女无瓜）。
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Section B: 2020年中考真题最强解读（全球首发）
题目要求：
再阅读了Willard Wigan的故事后，你有什么感想呢？请浏览他的个人主页，请以‘Everyone can be special ’为题，根据自己或他人的经历，在留言区留下你的故事”。
题眼解读：
“浏览个人主页”， “留言”，“自己或他人的经历”，“everyone is special”。
真题链接：
今年作文沿袭了2019年的作文和D篇阅读理解具有极大相关性的传统，体现了以读促写的教学理念。D篇的主要内容是这篇作文内容的脉络重点，主要讲了阅读障碍者同时成就微雕大师的伟业的故事，这个TED我上课给学生看过，你们记得吗？
最强审题：
看了这个‘Everyone can be special’的题目后，我瞬间想到了“风华绝代”的哥哥张国荣的一首歌《我》， “每个人都是造物者的光荣”-来自于 著名作词人“词仙”“现代李白”林夕的满分命题作文答卷。里面有一句广为传唱的歌词：我就是我，是颜色不一样的鞭炮，噢不，是烟火。
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Anyway，今年的题目与往年相比，的确有所不同，所谓天生我材，每个人都是无一物二的个体；更侧重的是“自我挖掘”，“自我认知”。其实这一题材其实出现的频率并不高，对于学生的审题要求非常高。
模考相关：
2020年浦东三模：I did better in__________
2020年浦东二模：A letter to my hero
2019年长宁一模：This time I made my own decision
2018 年中考真题：My progress
最强范文(HENRY原创）：
Everyone can be special
The story is encouraging and it reminds me of my own experience.
I used to be an ordinary boy who seldom thought about doing something special.
Cooking delicious food, a valuable skill, never crossed my mind.
To be frank, I came up with the idea of cooking independently because I was really curious about cooking and my parents were busy with their work.
To cook the special dinner, I not only downloaded a useful App about cooking but also turned to my aunt, an experienced cook for help.
Thanks to the help of my aunt and my own effort, the hard work was just like a piece of cake.
I finally learned how to cook delicious food.
The experience of cooking enables me to be confident about ‘exploring’ my unknown field and I do believe everyone can be special as long as he is willing to step out of his comfort zone and make great efforts.
HENRY最强亮点句子解析:
1. The story is encouraging and it reminds me of my own experience. I used to be an ordinary boy who seldom thought about being special. Cooking delicious food, a valuable skill, never crossed my mind.
开篇点题，直接明了。a valuable skill 是cooking delicious food的同位语，sth cross sb’s mind 某人想到某事，这里用词非常地道。
2. To be frank, I came up with the idea of cooking independently because I was really curious about cooking and my parents were busy with their work.
其中come up with 表达非常地道，相当于 think of 想出来,比如come up with a cure for the disease. Because引导原因状语从句，其中两个理由合情合理，恰如其分。
3. To cook the special dinner, I not only downloaded a useful App about cooking but also turned to my aunt, an experienced cook for help.
具体如何实施的用not only 和but also 高含金量连接词连用，内容详实，思路新颖。
4. Thanks to the help of my aunt and my own effort, the hard work was just like a piece of cake. I finally learned how to cook delicious food.
用法新颖：be like a piece of cake 相当于be easy, 巧妙使用了上海版牛津教材9BU4的关于idiom（习语）的话题，源于课本，又不拘一格。比如玩得很开心：have the time of our lives; 大吃一惊：jump out of my skin.
5. I not only knew how to cook delicious food with the help of the cooking APP , but also I gained a precious experience of standing on my own feet.
其中not only 和but also 连接两个平行分论点。理由非常convincing以及logical.其中stand on my own feet 老美的原汁原味表达方式。
6. The experience of cooking enables me to be confident about ‘exploring’ my unknown field and I do believe everyone can be special as long as he is willing
to step out of his comfort zone and make great efforts.
Exploring my unknown field这表达脱俗又难度系数不高，乃点睛之笔。everyone can be special as long as he is willing to step out of his comfort zone and make great efforts 其中 make great efforts 运用中考高频词汇非常接地气。总结干净利落，又满满干货。
#硬核总结#
近三年的作文共性都是选取一个方面，结合自身（或他人）经历展开。作文的选材都取自于极具立体感和丰富性的学生日常生活，并要求学生写出相关的经历或感悟，学生一般都可以言之有物，言之有理，言之有情。此类作文的问体为夹叙夹议，即：议论和记叙相结合的文体。
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